The Thackery Journal
By John Holt
Synopsis: On the night of April 14th 1865
President Abraham Lincoln was attending a performance at The Ford Theatre, in
Washington. A single shot fired by John Wilkes Booth hit the President in the
back of the head. He slumped to the floor, and died a few hours later without
recovering consciousness. Was Booth a lone assassin? Or was he part of a wider
conspiracy? What if Booth had merely been a willing party to a plot to replace
Lincoln with General Ulysees S. Grant. Let us suppose that Booth had been set
up by a group of men, a group of Lincoln’s own Army Generals; Generals who had
wanted Ulysees S Grant for their President, and not Lincoln. And let us also
suppose that the funding for the assassination had come from gold stolen by the
Confederate Army.
John says: “TheThackery Journal” is a ‘What If’ story set at the time of the American Civil
War. It concerns the assassination of President Abraham Lincoln and is told
through the pages of the journal of Captain Jacob Thackery of the Confederate
Army.
The
following excerpt is taken from the first chapter of the book. It is set after
the war, and after the President has been assassinated. The elderly man is
Jacob’s father, and he is reading through the journal, and sets the scene for
the story to unfold.
The
challenge for me was to establish the time period, and the events that occurred
very quickly, and very dramatically. My normal genre is Crime, and I have
written four novels featuring my private detective Tom Kendall. ‘The Thackery
Journal’ took me way outside my comfort zone. So why did I write it you may
ask. The answer isn’t that simple. My first novel “The Kammersee Affair” is
about the search for hidden nazi gold. When researching I came across an
article regarding confederate gold bullion going missing just as the Civil War
was coming to an end.
I imagined a scene where the perpetrators had finally
been tracked down and their pursuers were closing in – this was to become the
final chapter of “Thackery”. That gave me a lead in to chapter one. And there
it came to an abrupt stop. I started to write my Kendall novels, occasionally
adding something to “Thackery”. I got to the stage where I had three or four
good chapters to start, a couple at the end, but very little in the middle.
Then about six months ago it all became very clear, and after four years I
finished the book in about four months.
Excerpt:
Seated close to the
fireside, in the large high back chair, was an elderly man. He sat hunched
forward, his head hung down, his white hair shimmering in the firelight.
Billows of smoke, from his pipe, rose into the air and disappeared into the
darkness. Curled up on the rug next to him was an elderly dog fast asleep, its
head resting on its front paws. The man looked down at the dog for a few
moments, and then slowly turned to the last page of the handwritten document
that he was reading. He gasped audibly.
Although he had read the
small faded document several times already, he was still shocked to notice that
the handwriting on that last page had become quite shaky, and he had some
difficulty in actually reading the words.
“I can hear them coming,”
the document read. “They are coming up the staircase.” He had read the document
so many times that he actually knew the words by heart. “They are outside now,”
he whispered. “Banging on the door, they are coming for me.”
The man looked up, staring
into the darkness. He shook his head. “Banging on the door,” he repeated
slowly, in a hushed voice. He could almost see them, running up the stairs,
their boots echoing loudly on the timber treads. Then they were there, standing
outside by the door to the boy’s room. He could hear their breathing, their
hearts beating fast. He could imagine them calling excitedly to each other.
“Here,” one would cry out.
“In there,” said another.
“We have him now,” cries a
third.
“He cannot get away, not
this time,” from a fourth.
The elderly man could hear
the heavy thud as they smashed on the door, first with their fists, then with
their shoulders, and finally with a battering ram hurriedly brought in from
outside.
“Open up,” they scream, as
they strike the door over and over again. “Open up, you can’t get away.”
He could almost hear the
timber doorframe splitting, as the door was being wrenched from the hinges, the
frame being torn from the wall.
“They are coming for me,”
the document continued. “There is no way out. There is no escape.”
The man could only imagine
the torment, and the fear that the young man must have felt at that precise
moment. His situation was completely hopeless. He was completely alone. Capture
was inevitable. Did he call out for me, the man wondered, or perhaps he
had called for his mother? Did he pray? He shook his head sadly. There
was no way of knowing. But what he did know was that the young man must have
been frantic, desperate. What could he do? There was nowhere to turn. There was
no one to help. He was trapped. “No way out,” the man murmured. Then there came
that last cry for help. “May God have mercy on my soul.” Then the document came
to an abrupt ending. It was all over.
What had happened next
could only be guessed, but the elderly man did not need to guess. The blood
staining on the last few pages of the document gave a small clue. But he did
not need clues. He did not need hints. He knew precisely what had happened. The
report of the public inquiry had been quite detailed in that respect. No detail
had been omitted. Nothing had been left out. He had been told everything.
It would haunt him for the rest of his
life.
Thanks for featuring me Jill. It is much appreciated
ReplyDeleteThis is an exciting book with a lot of depth. The plot is original and full of action and the characters are so well drawn. It really should be a huge bestseller!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment Gerry - glad you liked it
DeleteGreat excerpt, John. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Kim
Thanks Kim - appreciated
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